The Feedback Sheets:
The feedback from the pitch was very constructive which was brilliant. Leanne made the point of me not having enough detailed audience research and I knew that this would be the case as, I am finding it hard/difficult to juggle all of the tasks on my own, which is expected. Leanne also said that the fonts chosen were all good but, there needs to be a refinement in the chosen font and then I should start to explore that font in more specific routes by creating colours and then handing out to a series of people to get an even larger audience research portfolio.
The feedback from the pitch was very constructive which was brilliant. Leanne made the point of me not having enough detailed audience research and I knew that this would be the case as, I am finding it hard/difficult to juggle all of the tasks on my own, which is expected. Leanne also said that the fonts chosen were all good but, there needs to be a refinement in the chosen font and then I should start to explore that font in more specific routes by creating colours and then handing out to a series of people to get an even larger audience research portfolio.
Other comments that were constructive included carrying out
more audience researching, choosing a font specifically and refocusing the
demographic. As a result of the comments I hope to within the upcoming week
rectify these mistakes by changing my audience profiling, then focusing on one
font. The last thing I need to do is focus the narrative of my story that will
go in the music video so that it is more through.
I do though have to recognise that there were positive
comments that came of the pitch including:
-The image of the model is consistent to the description and
tone of the artist.
-The tone that I talk about is consistent with the genre and
will work if carried out effectively.
- The organic essence of the music video can be brought in.
-The artistic element is a great idea.
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