Progressing Print Advert:

I have as you can see made a lot of alterations to the print advert and this was to try and make the design more professional and nicer to look at. 

The main changes that I made were changing the background, positioning of certain layers, adding writing etc. I think that all these changes were necessary to make the design more professional and coherent to the artist. The most successful alteration has to be the background as it is far more easier to look at, and more interesting. I think that prior to having the crumbled paper and the swirls the design was less likely to look as if it would be an existing product in the music industry. I love the continuous colour scheme.

To improve the design I think that I should possibly try and add some more layers and just look at what conventions of the print advert are missing. Once I have looked at all the conventions of the print advert I should add the ones missing and add them.  The only conventions though that I know of and think should be on the design are already there though.