Feedback on my Blog with Leanne

Leanne and me when looking at my blog assessed how I was doing so far in terms of research and planning so that I knew what I could improve in the future. Leanne thought that overall my blog documented every process cohesively and that everything that i needed to access was accessed and documented. Overall, the main thing that i learnt from talking to leanne was that if i carry on the way that i am i will be in the top band of the research and planning AO objective.

Leanne, did though pick up on some spelling errors on my blog that i need to rectify if my blog is to look cohesive. This included spelling all labels correctly and making sure that all "I's" are correct. This will ensure that my blog is concise and the simple literacy features are all correct.

Within, the next week I have to make sure that my blog has been updated and includes all of the posts that me and Leanne disused. I have to also on posts that currently have no description, have a valid description of why I carried out that task and what I learnt from them. I need to also carry out certain tasks such as making posts that describe what my artist is about, the genre and also posts that detail how I can see my music video going; planning key features such as costuming and characters.

Leanne also suggested that I carry on the way that I am for the other part of this task keeping up to date. We discussed every digipak post and Leanne felt that if I had the time that I should possibly try and do another green-screen analysis but with the Norah Jones divi-pak for "Take me Home". I agreed, but this is not essential so will be one of the last things that I attempt to do.